THEFINALDAY ItwasTHEFINALDAYthatIbecausetomorrowIwouldhavetomovewheremyauntlived。Myfriendswereverysad,andImyselfwasalsotoo。Wehuddledthereforalongtime,untilourparentscalledushome。Tshome。Thatdaywassoveryhot,andwehadtoclimbamountainbeforewearrive。Actually,Igottosaythatthatwasquiteamazing。 Nottomentionhatduringtheclimbing,Iheardsomethingthathadshockedmeverymuch。WhichalsomeantthatItgettocareasmuchasIanditalsogavemeaverygoodideathatdependsonmybraveness,actuallynotthatideasortof。 Hereishowthestorywenton:Whenwearrivedatthestation,IgotoffandsaidthatIhadmissedmyfriendsvery,butmymothersaidthatIcouldseetheminthefuture。 Iwasveryangryabouthosewords,andranoffasquicklyasIbutmydadcaughtmesincethathewasinthefirst。Imydadsaidthatweweregoingtoclimbamountain。 Whenwearrived,dadshowedmethemap,andthatweweregoingtohaveaclimbingrace。Mydadwonofcourse,andIwasthelast。Ibutmymomsaidthatwasmatter。ThenIsaid,BecausefirstIthenIbecameangrybecauseyousaidthatItheneverythingwentwrong。Likewhat?askedmymomanddadtogether,LSo,itwasjustforfunlikeplayingvideogamesinthehouse。Ortryingtoblowupyourbodyinthelab,weareonlystayinghereforonewholenight,atthesewordsIevensurprisedofmywits。 Thatwaswhenthenextmorning,Iwentback,andcouldplaywithmyfriendsoncemore。Itwasaveryfunnystorysinceitwasarealone,andIthoughtthatweweregoingmovethere。Myfriendsquestionedmeaboutit,andyesIonlyhadoneanswer,Itlistencarefully。 修改后 spanItwasTHEFINALDAYthatIbecausetomorrowIwouldhavetomovetotheplacewheremyauntlived。Myfriendswereverysad,andImyselfwasalsosad。Wehuggedthereforalongtime,untilourparentscalledushome。Tshome。Thatdaywassoveryhot,andwehadtoclimbamountainbeforewearrive。Actually,Igottosaythatwasquiteamazing。 Nottomentionthatduringtheclimbing,Iheardsomethingthathadshockedmeverymuch。WhichalsomeantthatItgettocareasmuchasIanditalsogavemeaverygoodideathatdependsonmybraveness,actuallynotthatideasortof。 Hereishowthestorywenton:Whenwearrivedatthestation,IgotoffandsaidthatIhadmissedmyfriendsvery,butmymothersaidthatIcouldseetheminthefuture。 IwasveryangryaboutthosewordsandranoffasquicklyasIbutmydadcaughtmesincethathewasinthefirst。Imydadsaidthatweweregoingtoclimbamountain。 Whenwearrived,dadshowedmethemapandthatweweregoingtohaveaclimbingrace。Mydadwonofcourse,andIwasthelast。Itmatter。ThenIsaid,BecausefirstIthenIbecameangrybecauseyousaidthatItheneverythingwentwrong。Likewhat?askedmymomanddadtogether,LSo,itwasjustforfunlikeplayingvideogamesinthehouse。Ortryingtoblowupyourbodyinthelab,weareonlystayinghereforonewholenight,atthesewordsIevensurprisedofmywits。 Thenextmorning,Iwentbackandcouldplaywithmyfriendsoncemore。Itwasaveryfunnystorysinceitwasarealone,andIthoughtthatweweregoingmovethere。Myfriendsquestionedmeaboutit,andyesIonlyhadoneanswer,Itlistencarefully。 四年级:欧阳雨鹭