TheLabelIWore，TheLabelIWore范文

　　TheLabelIWore
　　Today，mostofmyfriendswillprobablydescribemeasanoutgoingandsomewhattalkativegirl，displayingherboldnessinstudyaswellasvarioussocialactivities。Butseveralyearsago，whenIwasinmiddleschool，thingswerequitetheopposite。Despitemyoutstandinggraderecord，Ioncebelongedtoagroupthatdemandedlittlenoticeduetomychildhoodpersonality。Peoplearoundlabeledmeastimid，andthatlabel，regardlessofthesomuchbitterfeelingitaroused，hasbecomesomethingofalifetimeinfluenceonme。
　　Asachild，Itookaftermymotherandwasquiet，shyandsomewhatclumsyatverbalexpression。Theproblem，asIoftenreflectedupon，wasnotthatIwasunsociableoreccentric，forallofmyclassmatesandteachersmingledwellwithme。ItwasthatIwouldblushandfeeldizzywhenmanypeoplelookedatmeatthesametime。IwassouneasyinpublicthatIaminclinedtoshutmymouth，whichsadlyresultedinmylabeltimidity。
　　Bearingsuchalabelwasanythingbuteasyformetotolerate。EverytimeIfinallypluckedupenoughcouragetoraisemyhandandtriedtoairmyview，Istoodthereonlytofindtherestfiftypairsofeyesfixingonme，allwiththesametraceofsurpriseanddoubtinthemasifaquietpersonlikemewerenotsupposedtotalkinpublic。DistressimmediatelyseizedmeandIbegantostutter，swallowedupmywellcontrivedspeechandretreatedintomyseat。Ifeltabasedandhurt。
　　NeverhadIfoundthelabelsoannoyinganddetestableasonthoseoccasions。Aninnervoiceagainandagainclatteredinmybrain：Yourenotinferiorordull。Whycantyoujusttalkfreelylikethetalkative？Ifyouwannahaveachange，itsuptoyouyourself。Thebiggestobstaclelayinsideme。AslongasIcouldovercomemytimidity，therestwouldtakecareofitself。
　　Andinthoseyears，neverhadIstoppedthispainstakingyetextremelyrewardingshiftfromspeechlessnesstoverbalstrength。Atthebeginning，Ipromptedmyselftogivesimpleyesornoquestions。Inastepbystepfashion，Iwasthensupposedtotalkinlongsentences，todiscussandtopresent。Urgedbyaninnerdrive，ItookpainswiththetransitionandwitnessedwiththeutmostjoythechangeIwasgoingthrough。Forthefirsttime，Ididntfeeluneasyunderpublicattention。Forthefirsttime，myresponsetoteachersquestionwasapplauded。IrejoicedineverybitofprogressImade。ConfidencebegantosetrootinmeandI，likeastrayingchildwhocatchessightofhome，wasgraduallyledbacktomymesmerizedeloquence。IfinallyrecoveredwhatIhadbeencravingforsolong。
　　Nowyearshavepassedwhenthelabeloftimiditynolongerhauntsme。Ifindthisexperiencemostvaluableandinterestinginretrospection。Nodoubt，labelingexertsprofoundinfluenceon
　　inpidualsdevelopmentandthecommonbeliefisthatpeoplewillliveuptotheirlabels，implyingthatpositivelabelsinspireandencourageuswhereasnegativeonesonlyworsenthesituation。Butafterall，nomatterhowdisheartenedorfrustratedwefeelabouttheprejudice，wearethesolemastersofourowndestinies。Whyfallvictimstothelabel？AsFranklinD。Rooseveltsaid，Theonlythingwehavetofearisfearitself。Thepointistofreeourselvesfromthefearfornegativelabelsandcheerupinsideustheunrelentingwilltooverthrowthem。Thelabelissomethingofamirror。Aslongasweadjustourselves，thereflectionsinthemirrorwillaltertoo。Inthissense，negativelabelingmayaswellbecomesomethingextremelypositiveandrewarding，justasIveexperienced。
　　简评
　　世界上最难战胜的就是自我，在自我的软弱面前是沉默，还是勇敢地去面对？挑战自我，你会发现人生变得更有意义了。
　　第一、二、四段最后一句都出现了timidity一词，紧扣主题。keyword的重复出现，加深读者印象，增强文章的节奏感。
　　第三段的心理描绘，细腻真实，抓住一个细节进行放大，把笔者的心理表达得淋漓尽致。文章用词准确，表达生动，如作者写到试图在众人面前说话时，IfinallypluckedupenoughcouragetoraisemyhandandtriedtOairmyview可她却发现此刻，DistressimmediatelyseizedmeandlbegantOStutter，swallowedupmywellcontrivedsveechandretreatedintomyseat面对这样的挫败，她并不气馁，一段简短的自白，道出了她的决心：YourenotinferiorordullWhycantyoujusttalkfreelylikethetalkative？Ifyouwannahaveachance，itsuptoyouyourself在战胜怯懦的过程中，她曾经感到annoymganddetestable，可她所付出努力是painstakingyetextremelyrewarding，战胜怯懦后的感觉是mostvaluableandinteresting。此外，作者的表达准确，用词灵活、生动，驾驭语言的能力很强。
　　冒雯雯同学给我们留下了一个鼓舞人心又有启迪意义的结论，借用美国总统Franklin的话告诉我们Theonlythingwehavetofearisfearitself并且，以一个浅显的比喻，形象地讲出了这个影响她一生性格的深刻道理。这个结尾是积极的，耐人寻味的。
　　（点评教师：卢爱华）
　　TheLabelIWore